Peer Review Number 3

I enjoyed this peer review the most out of all of them. I feel like seeing it from a teachers perspective is different than seeing it from a peers perspective. Kole did a really good job of telling me what I could change or what she liked. I have a lot more work to do, as to my statistics and factual information behind the commercials. Kole had a good idea to maybe look at the behind the scenes of the commercial, because while they are selling only the hair coloring product, they make Sarah Jessica Parker and the girls on the cover of the box look really good.  A customer might think that by buying the product she too will be able to look like Sarah Jessica Parker; I know this is unrealistic but you'd be surprised as to who might actually believe this.