Paper 2 Feedback

I agree with all of the feedback, my focus has to change in order to address the requirements of the paper. Jackson as an icon is different than the man that I focus on in my draft. I plan on finding a few news articles that convey an image and textual information about important aspects of Jackson's life that make him an icon. I am going to focus on several pictures and their relation to text, and how this changed the audiences view of Michael, the good and the bad aspectsof his life. An icon is someone that we will never forget for their accomplishments and their short comings; I need to embrace all sides of MJ.